Sunday, May 16, 2010

GUTARGOON

mumbai ki chipchipi garmi ki ek dophar, main ek coffee shop mein kuch doston ke saath baitha tha,ek nai film ki kahani par vichaar vimarsh kar rahe the lekin mera dyaan sadak ke us paar kabootaron ke jhund mein zyaada tha,kuch hritik roshan ke sar pe virajmaan the aur kuch us billboard ke charanon mein.kuch saamjik taur pe jagrit log kam se kam in kabootaron ko toh daana dala he jaate hain,bagal mein pade us aadhe nange bikhari bachche ko muft mein do gaali bhi de jaate hain.sabki mundi kisi hiphop dancer ki tarah ek laya mein daana chugti hui,tabhi peeche se ek jaani pahchaani hi ki awaaz aayi ek aur dost tha,wahi raterataye andaaz mein haath milana,gale lagna,wahi ghise pite sawaal jawaab,kaisa hai? kya chal raha hai? ghar pe sab theek? vagairah aur hum phir apne apne jhund mein aa gaye.film ka pahla draft taiyaar ho chuka tha ab tak,doosre ki shuruat aur ia baar main apne aas paas baithe kabootaron ke jhund mein kho gaya,har table par kuch kabootar,magar yahaan variety thi,har tarah ke the,kabootariyan bhi thi saji dhaji koi naya kabootar dhoondhti hui kuvh apna saath laayi thi.har table pe ek film ban rahi thi,kuch 20 table hongi toh sharukh, amitabh aur salmaan ab tak 15 filmein toh sign kar he chuke the.har kabootar apna daana dhoondhta hua,yahan pe ek fark tha yahaan apna daana khud he dhoondana padta hai,aur agar daana na mile toh kabootar dhoondna padta hai jo daana leke aaye.main bhi unhi mein se ek kabootar hoon,apna daana dhoondhta hua,par woh kahte hain na ki daane daane pe likha hai.....................!

13 comments:

  1. hmm... serious baat hai par kahi achche tareeke se gayee gayi hai.... keep it up bro...

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  2. Liked it Jaaneman.. Brings out a completely new side of yours.. Gud One.. Keep it Up..

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  3. ithink ur complete star icon.... tumbhi kamala ke ho....hmmmm nice...dude...!well frist of all, i wish u best of luck n soon u will getting excelent opprtunity....!but don't forget me...!
    namsjoshi

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  4. sahi hai....Ashishi ji keep it onn...

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  5. zindagi ki bhagambhaag ko bahut khoob express kiya hai apne...mumbai me beet rhi strugglers ki zindagi in kabootro ki trah hi hai...umeed kayam hai ki ek din inki trah khule aasmaa me ud payenge...
    yogita...

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  6. u r an awsome actor.oua bst wishes r wid u!!!

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  7. jis daane par likha hai naam mera
    woh agar mil jaye kahin aaj
    toh poochhungi usse ki tera
    milna kyon hai ek paheli ki tarah
    jo sapnon mein bhi awaaz diye
    gaate huye guzarta hai
    kahin meri aankhon mein basi
    rangon ki jhalak chhalkata hai
    kahin jo mil jaaye mujhe
    kal hi mere darwaze par
    ik lifaafe mein hui band meri
    anpadhi taqdeer ki tarah....

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  8. the way you xpress urself z truly xotic n superkool...typical traits of a nice actor...
    :-)

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  9. u r much more deep than one can see. kamal ka likha hain. aapki har kruti ek sunapan ya khalipan ka ahasas jhalkta hain.. alag hi nazriya hain.. padhkar achchha laga..

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  10. kya hindi hai solid man keep it up

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  11. Awesome...aap likhte rahiye...bahut acha likhte hain

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  12. Awesome...aap likhte rahiye...bahut acha likhte hain

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