kabhi kabhi raat ko main chakme se uth baith ta hoon,
hazaron rangeen tarange jaise badan se guzri hon,
halak sukha,ghanghor andhera,seene mein chot deti dhadkan,
banjar zameen sa man phir bhi baith sochta hoon,
kabhi kabhi raat ko main chakme se uth baith ta hoon..
andhiyare man ki tanha galiyon mein,
kuch harkat si mahsoos hoti hai,
paani bharne ko jaati meri trishna mahsoos hoti hai,
haath badha use mahsoos karma chahta hoon,
wo shwet kiran andera hoti mahsoos hoti hai,
kabhi kabhi raat ko main chakme se uth baith ta hoon……..
nice thoughts good work keep it up
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ReplyDeletemujhko jab unchai de,
mujhko jamin dikhai de,
ek sada aisi bhi ho,
mujhko saaf sunai de,
dur rahoon main khud se bhi,
mujhko wo tanhai de,
ek khudi bhi mujhme ho,
mujhko agar khudai de,
khud ko dekhun roj naya,
mujhko wo binai de.
wow
ReplyDeletehey nice lines...
ReplyDeleteserious thoughts
Nice Lines..
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simply wow! :-)
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ReplyDeletereally nice n meaningful :)
ReplyDeleteWas searching for some good writings and found your post. Its a real nice one., can take help of this to develop and direct my writing skills... Good thoughts, awesome.
ReplyDeletehalak sukha,ghanghor andhera,seene mein chot deti dhadkan,
ReplyDeletebanjar zameen sa man phir bhi baith sochta hoon,
kabhi kabhi raat ko main chakme se uth baith ta hoon..
andhiyare man ki tanha galiyon mein,
kuch harkat si mahsoos hoti hai,
paani bharne ko jaati meri trishna mahsoos hoti hai,
loveed these line most .... you have drown emotions very well